Arkay
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Re: Referring to him as Rick instead of the defendant or Mr. Allen -- Yeah, it's strategic. It's not unprofessional.
I respect that you are a verified attorney, so I just have a question, as many others have, about the language employed throughout.
If, as you say, this 136 page document was prepared for the judge’s perusal, I can grasp why the lawyers would refer to the suspect as “Rick.” The implication would be that the suspect is not a threatening, murderous, bizarre specimen named “Mr. Allen,” but is merely good old Rick from CVS. Nothing to see here, and so forth.
In a document that is meant to be “in-house,” as it were, is it customary to use such colloquial language In laying out the points they are making? As in @Sillybilly’s example from page 130, and these examples from pp. 131 and 132, respectively:
I‘ve never encountered a legal document that incorporated such phrases as someone “screwed up,” or “Well, since we can’t ….”
This document is replete with such casual language throughout. To a layperson such as me, it’s quite startling to read such a conversational tone in a legal document.
My question once more, sincerely asked, is this the typical manner in which a crucial legal document is written when it is again “in-house,“ meant originally for the judge alone?
TIA and JMO
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