You expressed what I was trying to say better than I did in my original comment. It's chock full of information about her mother's relationships, pregnancies, drug addiction, flightiness, criminal record, etc. Meanwhile, it barely glosses over JD's own criminal behavior, addiction, or spiral into the lifestyle which resulted in her murder. It's like, "Mom this, mom that, by the way I went to rehab for cocaine and apparently danced and lived in these cities and then my ex-boyfriend shot me to death!" The writeup goes into arguably-too-much detail about her mother's life, but it doesn't even mention her "ex-boyfriend" was actually her pimp, or even that she worked as a prostitute at all. It treats her like a side character in her own story, and her mother as the main character! I don't believe this is the story Kelly would want written about her life and death, and to do so "borrowing" her voice takes some nerve.
Side note -- on this forum, we often talk about the names, stories, and voices of these Does being stolen with their lives. This just isn't the appropriate way to restore them. I'm shocked something like this would come from someone as admired and respected as Yolanda McClary!
Can we get a redo writeup? I'd like to read a version that explores Kelly's life in detail and only contains a few lines about an unstable, drug-addicted mother whose absence and reemergence was, ironically, the only constant in her life.