Why didn't he think to send it to Jodi for editing, she has the time.
"Ms. Arias....er..Jodi, now that the trial is behind us, maybe it's time we bury the hatchet...er...no...I didn't mean that..what I mean is...I've written a book about the trial, in which YOU figure prominently, and my grammar skills aren't up to...standards...so, I thought, with your abilities, you might...well, like to contribute, in the form of editing...I promise I'll give you credit...
Screams, and the smell of burning paper, and the constant sound of toilet flushing fill the halls of Perryville....