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This is the email that Elidet sent back to me after I agreed to do the article:
Hi, Bobby,
Thank you for getting back to me and for helping with this case. I am working with Oxnard Police Department, which is handling the case.
What I need from you is a picture and 3-5 sentence bio about you and your background. Should be written in third person, but we edit and proof read everything here so we just need your info.
You are going to be added as a contributor to this issue of the magazine. Once it is printed, it will also be available online, but I can send you extra copies for yourself.
This info will be included in our masthead, where we post the Letter from the Editor.
About the Case:
I am not looking for someone to write about how sad the family is that he is missing.
What I am looking for is information that can help solve the case, like a detective.
The Ventura County Star's article didn't include information that can lead to solving the case. I want to do better, our quality and standards are higher so I expect a more detailed article or story for our magazine.
The reason I contacted you was because I saw that you ask other questions like what happened at the bachelor party. That is exactly the kind of person I would like to be involved in helping write this article.
I can go interview and look for people that you need to me interview if we can find them.
Here are things I want included in the article (remember, I will be editing and contributing as well, so this article will be written by both of us, and you do get credit for it.)
1. Who's bachelor party was it? (I understand that this gentleman is deceased, however, this is something I want included.)
2. Who was at the bachelor party? (We would be contacting the detective assigned to this case.)
3. How was he at the bachelor party? Drunk, sober, hyper, etc?
4. Where did he work?
5. Who was he married to? (She is also deceased, but this needs to be included.)
6. Who were his friends?
7. What lead up to the disappearance? What did he do that day and night?
8. Where was the party vs. where did he live at the time? (I am adding a little map for illustration purposes.)
9. What high school did he attend?
10. What was he like? Personality?
The article does not need to be written in this order, these are just some of the things I need in there. I don't expect you to do all the research yourself.
I live locally, so I can be your eyes and research partner here in Oxnard. Any copies of old newspapers and such, I'm already working on it. I will be sending you information as I get it.
I am looking to contact the twin brother to interview him, and you will receive the audio of the interview for your research.
Please let me know what you need from me.
Call me anytime, 805-832-0351 and thank you for your time!
Elidet Bordon
805-832-0351
Editor
VenturaCountyCrimeBlog.com
Ventura County's Cold Cases
Hi, Bobby,
Thank you for getting back to me and for helping with this case. I am working with Oxnard Police Department, which is handling the case.
What I need from you is a picture and 3-5 sentence bio about you and your background. Should be written in third person, but we edit and proof read everything here so we just need your info.
You are going to be added as a contributor to this issue of the magazine. Once it is printed, it will also be available online, but I can send you extra copies for yourself.
This info will be included in our masthead, where we post the Letter from the Editor.
About the Case:
I am not looking for someone to write about how sad the family is that he is missing.
What I am looking for is information that can help solve the case, like a detective.
The Ventura County Star's article didn't include information that can lead to solving the case. I want to do better, our quality and standards are higher so I expect a more detailed article or story for our magazine.
The reason I contacted you was because I saw that you ask other questions like what happened at the bachelor party. That is exactly the kind of person I would like to be involved in helping write this article.
I can go interview and look for people that you need to me interview if we can find them.
Here are things I want included in the article (remember, I will be editing and contributing as well, so this article will be written by both of us, and you do get credit for it.)
1. Who's bachelor party was it? (I understand that this gentleman is deceased, however, this is something I want included.)
2. Who was at the bachelor party? (We would be contacting the detective assigned to this case.)
3. How was he at the bachelor party? Drunk, sober, hyper, etc?
4. Where did he work?
5. Who was he married to? (She is also deceased, but this needs to be included.)
6. Who were his friends?
7. What lead up to the disappearance? What did he do that day and night?
8. Where was the party vs. where did he live at the time? (I am adding a little map for illustration purposes.)
9. What high school did he attend?
10. What was he like? Personality?
The article does not need to be written in this order, these are just some of the things I need in there. I don't expect you to do all the research yourself.
I live locally, so I can be your eyes and research partner here in Oxnard. Any copies of old newspapers and such, I'm already working on it. I will be sending you information as I get it.
I am looking to contact the twin brother to interview him, and you will receive the audio of the interview for your research.
Please let me know what you need from me.
Call me anytime, 805-832-0351 and thank you for your time!
Elidet Bordon
805-832-0351
Editor
VenturaCountyCrimeBlog.com
Ventura County's Cold Cases