Thanks for taking the time to look at it everyone....no comment or suggestion is nit picky...I don't know how to snip all of the details so I will respond the best I can.
- one of the bullets already states that her appearance could have been altered; short haircut, boys clothing, etc.
- I already adjusted the spelling error to the park
- I didn't catch the mistake on his name - thanks.
- I did include the photo of his truck - didn't include ATs car because that was never mentioned in any of the reports as a car they were looking for - plus in respect to her family I didn't know if it would allude to anything? don't know if that car had any real relevance....do you think it should be there?
- I can add exchange to the reward bullet if its necessary - pretty much reads the same - but I will add.
Thanks all....so very appreciative