Okay, I took the Tad Cummins musical challenge ten minutes ago and listened to THAT SONG.
Musically and lyrically, it sounds like a 14-year old wrote it. The lyrics are trite, overused phrases that are clumsily constructed. "I could swim for a thousand years in the oceans inside your eyes and never reach the side". (The side of what? Now the ocean has turned into a swimming pool?) "You're the kind of woman a man can love for the rest of his life and I don't know why. I feel it's your eyes. Oh, your eyes." (OH, MY EARS!! HELP!) The music is a bunch of slamming piano chords without any real progression to speak of. And the voice sounds like a lonely banshee stuffed into a pair of Little Cruisers diapers and dying of terminal teen angst. I think he was trying to sound like a tortured soul. He succeeded.
The worst part is that he wrote this in his forties. And he has been a musician for a long time. It is understandable that a musician grows in his own good time, but I fear that by the time he gets good, the second Ice Age will have come and gone. And taken anything with ears in its wake.