"In the house at Oak Beach, Gilbert was not about to be murdered."
Reallly? And you know this for sure because........
"Her demeanor on the tape was calm. You can hear male voices on the tape, and they are calm. At no time during this call was she desperate. From what I heard on the call, Gilbert was not speaking as if she were in danger. Despite this, she decided to run from the house and her driver, whom she relied on to take her back to New Jersey. During the investigation, I interviewed an individual who drove Gilbert to her "dates" in the past. He said she would leave houses and apartments in the same fashion as she did in Oak Beach. He described her as being a paranoid person and at times acting irrationally.
If I wrote a report like this (forget about publishing it) my boss would have had a sheet feet.
"As we all know by now, Gilbert ran to another house seeking assistance."
We do? She did? Are you a witness? Instead, it should be worded, "(insert witnesses name) reported seeing Gilbert run to another house."
"She was let into the house. When the gentleman in the house said he was going to call the police, she ran into the reeds across the street."
Really? Again, were you a witness to this? Were you there to see this gentleman open the door and Gilbert enter the residence? Or are you taking this gentleman's word as fact?
"I also interviewed this gentleman. Finally, she knocked on another door, but again ran away before the woman who lived there could find out what was going on."
Again, better to word it this way: This gentleman reported seeing Gilbert knock on another door (a house number) and then run away before the woman who lived there could .......
17 years of experience? His superior would kick his butt. This had to be approved and published for a very good reason. Either that, or this guy is going to have an attorney rip him apart.