beesy
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Jim
Yes, I see it now. You watch the movie or read the book wondering who did this and how and why? So you would create a novel starting with Darlie and Darin's stories, with their inconsistencies, but without her rewrites. and keep everybody on the edge of their seats trying to figure out all of this crap we are doing right here! But in fiction, things come together, you find out who the killer is, you see, maybe in a flashback how and why and when. In real life this BS story will never come together, just as you said, that makes the reader frustrated. That's exactly what Darlie is doing to us. We can't find the missing pieces which could be found in a movie or a novel. Thanks Jim, now go convince Darlie that we need our ending!In good fiction, everything must have a logical and reasonable explanation. A good plot is nothing more than a sequence of cause-effect events that move in increasing intensity toward a climax. And everything must have an explanation. That's why you get frustrated with a book or movie that doesn't tie up all the loose ends