So my copy of the AS book arrived and I've re-read it. There was much I'd forgotten.
From the postscript, PL liked the first six chapters, but four days later took exception to it, demanded the return of all papers, and tried to suppress publication. It seems clear that what happened in those 4 days was that DL dyslexically managed to read the six chapters and objected to them; hence her husband's total volte face. The material she objected to, presumably, would have included the incident on the QE2 where SJL interrupted a card game by coming into the room and climbing into bed with one of the players; agreeing to what we'd now call a "FWB" arrangement; sleeping with a number of her men on the first date; and that she was four-timing AL with three other FWB exes just before she went missing. This is the stuff that was left in despite AS accommodating some of her demands for cuts, so one can only guess what was left out.
Otherwise: first off, HR is a totally, totally unreliable witness. He failed to identify the woman he says he saw, but according to AS, he assumed it was SJL because the police said she had been there. He then claimed to have seen her being bundled into a car before retracting this "exaggeration", or as we might say, "fabrication". This I knew but what I did not know was that he also IDed DR, the Belgian diamond dealer, as looking like Mr Kipper. AS notes that DR is short, podgy and 40-something, yet HR thought he was a dead ringer for "Mr Kipper", who was slim, well dressed and 30-odd. So according to the only witness who saw him, Mr Kipper was a slim, pudgy, 30-something in his 40s. So that's all clear then.
Several members of the public called in at the time to say the artist's impression of Mr Kipper looked a lot like MG. This is a point that's been made here many times. The police just laughed, apparently, at the suggestion that MG might have done it. It seems not to have occurred to them that maybe the callers weren't saying MG had done it, but that "Mr Kipper" looked like MG because that is who HR was describing!
The Stevenage sightings situation is even worse than it seems: a schoolboy said the car was there at midday - 40 minutes before SJL left the office. WJ thought the car she saw was silver, not white. It seems unavoidable that there was more than one car.
For the 37SR visit to have taken place followed by Stevenage, AS sets out what must have happened. "Mr Kipper" must have persuaded SJL to let him drive her there in her car (why?), supposedly to look at the Sturgis property there (without the keys to a second house?), parked in a hurry (why, if he's given her some spiel?), dragged her out across the driver's seat, and driven her away in another car. This was what 'James Galway' man described as 'a right ruck', but AS concedes that it's impossible to understand how 'James Galway man' noticed it, but the two BT workers did not. His sighting, related only at second-hand by the cabbie who dropped him off, is the only evidence SJL was ever in Stevenage Road.
Inferentially, the police seem only to have looked into SJL's background and contacts before she disappeared. It does not appear they noticed the bankruptcy of her close friend's husband eight days after she disappeared.
The whole story of CV's involvement is astonishing (AS uses CV's real name). The police relied entirely on his evidence in concluding that SJL never went to the PoW at all. Yet when his story changed a year later, they decided that his new story wasn't reliable after all. So they discarded it and continued to rely 100% on the the original. Nobody picked this up until DV did.
To me the best explanation of CV's story change is that in 1986, assuming the PoW was indeed where she met her end, his best bet was to act dumb and to say SJL had never turned up. By 1987 he realised, from reading the newspapers, that he had been gifted HR, the world's worst eyewitness, who had convinced the Keystone Cops 100% that she went to 37SR. This glorious, glorious bit of luck means that in 1987 he needed to make it clear he was nowhere near 37SR or her car. And he definitely wasn't 'James Galway' man near Stevenage Road - not me, officer. No way (did the police ever consider what he looked like? Did CV look like James Galway in 1986? DV has anonymised his name, so I assume also his appearance). So he made up a couple of phone calls that 'prove' he was at the PoW all day, and that he claimed to have mentioned a year before. Was that what CV was doing? Was he backdating his alibi by trying to get the police to believe they knew about it but they had bungled and lost the evidence?
The civilian reinvestigation was clearly as incompetent as the police initial investigation because they failed to notice the obvious significance of the PoW. They had SJL colleagues saying she intended to go there but they only had CV saying she never showed. If she showed up and only CV was there, well, he would say that, wouldn't he?
Nothing here undermines DV's hypothesis. Interestingly, if you think about it, if SJL did somehow take the keys to 37SR that doesn't prove she went there. If she did not have them, it does more or less prove that she didn't go. So DV's theory doesn't actually rely on the keys detail at all. In fact everything you need to be curious about the PoW is in there, if you're looking. We still don't have a motive for CV to harm her, unless he's some sort of sex criminal, with psychopath levels of detachment so he can switch the aggression on and off. Or, if the contents of SJL's diary were similar to the material that AS cut from the book, and CV read the diary, maybe he demanded sexual favours for its return? The only way to understand this is to search the locations DV suggests, so as to exonerate CV or incriminate him, at which point maybe we get an account of what happened and why.
Towards the end, AS describes another person as possibly involved but never charged. He gives no name but I wonder if that's the first reference to JC?
AS' main source is clearly the police because a/ he says so and b/ he has tacitly bought into a lot of their assumptions. The apocryphal story that SJL got her job at Sturgis by walking into a branch and being hired by MG is repeated, but we know this is not true. The claim that MG saw her take the keys is repeated, but we know this also isn't true, because AS elsewhere says he was at lunch. There is no real challenge of things the police inexplicably failed to do, such as ask for sightings of SJL elsewhere, search phone call logs to find out who spoke to whom when, and so on. Ultimately, and this is the main difference with DV's book, AS has no suggestions as to what else could have been done and hence no suggestions or hypothesis as to what might have happened to SJL.