BlinkOfAnI
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Yes there is so much info it's taken me a few reads. Reading the complaint it says "as he started to turn away", possibly meaning to leave? The following paragraph goes into him leaving. Kind of disjointed so that's a total guess on my part.It is worth rereading isn't it?
Your remark about planning everything perfectly yep, that was an interesting remark. One part that bothers me is when he said he turned his head as he shot Denise. I have trouble with that one, we have Mr. Cold Blooded here. Was it not wanting anything on him...? Or was Jayme trying to struggle? Or is he lying? Seemed like he got a good aim regardless... I did not think he was going to take any chances, well planned again--why would you turn away and not be sure...?