Imon128
Former Member
Hi, LP, nice to see you posting again, albeit we're on the opposing sides of this case.
I didn't see that comparison of writing content, only the submission of one chapter at a time to a publisher. JMO, though. I think LHP was 'had' in this instance, due to her being naive. I surely dont wish LHP ill.....(and yes, I think her first chapter draft could have been written better. It's still up for graps as why the content is written this way. The message is there, though, and shouldn't be dimissed due to technicalities of style, IMO.
I didn't see that comparison of writing content, only the submission of one chapter at a time to a publisher. JMO, though. I think LHP was 'had' in this instance, due to her being naive. I surely dont wish LHP ill.....(and yes, I think her first chapter draft could have been written better. It's still up for graps as why the content is written this way. The message is there, though, and shouldn't be dimissed due to technicalities of style, IMO.