sk716
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I'm really interested in the idea of the murderer as a noobie show runner - writing his first ever multi-episode netflix series, while under investigation by the Feds ...
It's extremely difficult to write convincing scenes if you've never done it before. What time was it? Well that needs to be keep vague to fit with other evidence. What did you eat? Amazing how often this detail is missing. All the physical actions - who did what? Where were you standing/sitting? What did the victim do?
What did you talk about? The noob never writes any dialogue for the victim because he is so focussed on progressing the plot. But the people in the story don't know a murder will soon happen. Yet frequently the noob foreshadows the murder.
BM makes all these mistakes. SM says and does nothing though she has the late afternoon ahead of her ...
I've always been a "world builder," so I think more about the details than the overarching plot. I'm bad about getting hung up on the details, too. To the point that until I can crack the individual detail in a plausible manner, I can't move forward. (As evidenced by 80+ threads of me obsessing over the Bobcat only to finally realize that Grusing was right all along. "At present, Barry’s use of the Bobcat does not appear to be connected to Suzanne’s disappearance." - AA pg 41 BBM)