Donjeta
Adji Desir, missing from Florida
- Joined
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Well, that ad just about sums it up how not to write if you really want a stable job that has nothing to do with stuff you do without clothes on. There is not a word about educational qualifications or previous work experience but it opens with her telling prospective employers that she's heartbroken, single and desperate. (Cause everybody wants to employ people just because they're single...)
The poem about staring in your eyes finding out about your tragedy and your pretty demons and taking my heart away seems very out of place in an ad for a genuine job. Someone who really wants you to be a housekeeper or a personal assistant does not want you to stare in their eyes all day, they want you to run errands and organize stuff. Then a random philosophical ramble about her trust in peace and sovereignty. What does it even mean. She does not eat meat or watch mindless drivel on TV. Um, OK.
I can't imagine why anyone who is genuinely looking for a stable job would make such a production about being heartbroken and destitute and ill-treated and please be a kind soul and be nice to me because my ex was a *advertiser censored*.
Why would an employer care about all that? They want to know what you can do for them, not what they can do for you.
The poem about staring in your eyes finding out about your tragedy and your pretty demons and taking my heart away seems very out of place in an ad for a genuine job. Someone who really wants you to be a housekeeper or a personal assistant does not want you to stare in their eyes all day, they want you to run errands and organize stuff. Then a random philosophical ramble about her trust in peace and sovereignty. What does it even mean. She does not eat meat or watch mindless drivel on TV. Um, OK.
I can't imagine why anyone who is genuinely looking for a stable job would make such a production about being heartbroken and destitute and ill-treated and please be a kind soul and be nice to me because my ex was a *advertiser censored*.
Why would an employer care about all that? They want to know what you can do for them, not what they can do for you.